Thursday, April 23, 2009

Spit and Polish: Misplaced Modifiers

On his way to the library, the dog chased Tim.

Sounds like Rover was a little distracted on the way to the local book repository. Wait...the dog chased Tim...oh. What we have here is a case of misplaced modifiers. The meaning of the sentence would be clearer if the modifier was closer to what it is modifying: On his way to the library, Tim was chased by the dog. Or reword the whole thing: Tim was on his way to the library when the dog chased him.

Clarify the following:
  1. While driving to the gym, the dog slobbered on Isabelle's jacket.
  2. John said he would stay home first, then he changed his mind and went to the movie.
  3. The captain steered the boat into the pier blinded by the fog.